Formal Interim Critique & Feedback

• Studio practice is developing well into final portfolio collection well/needs to speed up.

Developing well with some highly personal solutions in the form of 'book art'- do now think about the degree show and exactly what you hope to acheive and show.

• Clear Personal concept evident.

Good clear strong concept becoming stronger with more reasoning.

• Clear vision for work progress- through final collections and degree show/ more focus/planning needed.

You know this will be paper products and artist books solutions but do be ambitious and produce some larger pieces- A2 pieces/wall panels. This will show more range

• Personal organisation, time management and attendance is good/needs improving.

Very good throughout the module- continue to show this level of commitment and planning for final works.

• Recording and Planning for Personal Interpretation module is underway/needs improvement.

This should be underway, recording and evaluating your practice and methodology regulary- check and dicuss at next tutorial.

• Technical Innovation/ substrate awareness is good/innappropriate.

Your book ideas are progressing well but do explore producing some ideas for just paper prints as we discussed.

• Contextual awareness and its relationship to practice is sound and appropriate/ needs further investigation/research.

Do continue to research this area- other book artists and think about other possibilities for the work- gift wrap/ cards etc..

• Verbal presentation clear and confident/needs more practice and thinking through.

Good presentation with confidence, do try to articulate positively throughout, have your work in logical order- label these to remind if this helps but generally fine.

• Further Comments....

You have some lovely pieces, now perhaps slow down a little and reflect on what has been produced and whether this works well or not. Decide on your final collections of work- Aim to achieve diversity and range, scale, complexity etc..